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90. Triangle - Poem by =dark-blood-may:icondark-blood-may:



"You'll kill yourself climbing that stupid three dimensional triangle"
You tell me as if you know
You tell me as if you really care
You tell me as if I'll even listen

A mountain is no way a 'stupid triangle'
I will climb it, even if my death will come

With my gear
I climb...

And climb...

And climb...


Breathing comes harder now

The air is colder
I climb...

The top is in sight
And climb...

I'll make it
And climb...


I climbed
But I never did reach it
©2008-2009 =dark-blood-may
:icondark-blood-may:

Author's Comments

What is it about moutains that make people want to throw away their lives?

I said I was going to finish these before the end of the year, and here it goes. Nine poems tonight, and nine poems tomorrow night. I'm sorry for the devWATCH invasion I'm doing ^^; I hope you all will forgive me!

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:iconmydeadliestpesticide:
Sad.

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"There’s got to be something in between,
Something they‘ve missed, something unseen."
:icondark-blood-may:
Thank you for the :+fav: <3

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>>Michelle<<

I love you, Taylor =]

"You were given the life you live, because someone knew you were strong enough to live it."

:gallery:
[link] <<check it out peas^_^
:iconmydeadliestpesticide:
No problem!

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"There’s got to be something in between,
Something they‘ve missed, something unseen."
:iconsaberiel:
I will never understand the allure of rock climbing.
This is a good poem, though.

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"There are very few personal problems that cannot be solved through a suitable application of high explosives."

"Of all the bells rung from a thousand steeples, none rings truer than this."
:icondark-blood-may:
I like rock climbing, but not on actual rocks XD
Thank you =]

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>>Michelle<<

I love you, Taylor =]

"You were given the life you live, because someone knew you were strong enough to live it."

:gallery:
[link] <<check it out peas^_^
:iconsaberiel:
Exactly! There's less chance of...death. lol.

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"There are very few personal problems that cannot be solved through a suitable application of high explosives."

"Of all the bells rung from a thousand steeples, none rings truer than this."

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