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On this night
I'll make my promise to you
I'll stick to my word
So hold it true

I'll love you forever
Till the end of my life
For an eternity after
And yet it won't be long enough

I'll tell you I love you
Everyday of my life
Even when we bicker
Even when we fight

I'll hold on to my promise
As long as you hold on to yours
I'll look forward to the day
For all of our promises to come true
©2008-2010 =dark-blood-may
:icondark-blood-may:

Author's Comments

Yeah... I wrote this for one person(take a wild guess)
We have a few promises with eachother, and I hope they will never break.

(and I know this poem sucks -_- I just hope he won't be dissatisfied with it)

Non-Fiction :: I just went outside in a thunderstorm and got soaked
Fiction :: I'm not terrified of thunderstorms, so it's not a suprise

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:iconsaberiel:
This is so sweet ^^

--
"There are very few personal problems that cannot be solved through a suitable application of high explosives."

"Of all the bells rung from a thousand steeples, none rings truer than this."
:icondark-blood-may:
>.< thanks

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>>Michelle<<

I love you, Taylor =]

"You were given the life you live, because someone knew you were strong enough to live it."

:gallery:
[link] <<check it out peas^_^
:iconmydeadliestpesticide:
Awesome.

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"There’s got to be something in between,
Something they‘ve missed, something unseen."
:icondark-blood-may:
thank you ^_^ and thanks for the fav

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>>Michelle<<

I love you, Taylor =]

"You were given the life you live, because someone knew you were strong enough to live it."

:gallery:
[link] <<check it out peas^_^
:iconmydeadliestpesticide:
No problem.

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"There’s got to be something in between,
Something they‘ve missed, something unseen."
:iconkylia1992:
I love it :heart:
I really do :)

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CURIOSITY ADVANCED THE KITTEHS!

:groups: #TheTechCorner #Caribbeans #Mental-IllnessClub #Grievances :groups:

!ChadSyphrett
:icondark-blood-may:
thankyou ^_^

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>>Michelle<<

I love you, Taylor =]

"You were given the life you live, because someone knew you were strong enough to live it."

:gallery:
[link] <<check it out peas^_^
:iconinnocent-shiver:
aww this is cute!
just 'onto' should be 'on to'
but other than that,
this is nicely written.

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"And like autumn turns leaves, winter will breathe..."
:icondark-blood-may:
ahh thank you, I'm careless and make tons of typos
Thank you ^_^

--
>>Michelle<<

I love you, Taylor =]

"You were given the life you live, because someone knew you were strong enough to live it."

:gallery:
[link] <<check it out peas^_^

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