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The Fearsome Flush by =dark-blood-may:icondark-blood-may:

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A royal flush
The best hand to get
You may think they are just printed paper
But you can't be ever more wrong
The cards are living
They have a personality of their own

The ten of diamonds
The lovely maiden
But looks can decieve
So never trust your eyes
She's more than you think
So don't go fast by

The jack of spades
A lively young lad
He loves too much
And will protect till his death
He lives for his lady
He serves for the best

The queen of clubs
She's anything but sweet
She'll take on the toughest
Knowing she will win
She puts fear in many
The most fearful queen

The king of hearts
He is far too gentle
Compared to his queen
He loves hard and hardly recieves
He cares too might
Making life a bit hard

And then the ace of stars
An unseen card
A childish boy
Stuck in a little toy
But still you better watch him
He loves pranks

And there you go
The best hand in the deck
They're fearsome as a whole
And unique alone
But what's the chances
Of getting such a wonderful deck?
©2008-2009 =dark-blood-may
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Submitted: March 30, 2008
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So I decided to try entering :iconapplecherry:'s contest at the last minute ^^;

I'm not sure if it's good, and I'm alittle nervous because this is the first contest I have ever entered :blush:

Characters and picture are owned by :iconapplecherry:
Poem is owned by me =D
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=MyDeadliestPesticide:iconMyDeadliestPesticide: Mar 30, 2008, 9:28:20 AM
I like the personalities.

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"There’s got to be something in between,
Something they‘ve missed, something unseen."
=dark-blood-may:icondark-blood-may: Mar 30, 2008, 9:32:16 AM
thank you

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>>Michelle<<

I love you, Taylor =]

"You were given the life you live, because someone knew you were strong enough to live it."

:gallery:
[link] <<check it out peas^_^
~mizeryfoxo0:iconmizeryfoxo0: Mar 30, 2008, 9:42:15 AM
dude thats so cool !!!!!!!!!! ^-^ :boogie:

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some people are like slinkys their good for nothing but they bring a smile to your face when you throw them down the stairs - :shrug:
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=dark-blood-may:icondark-blood-may: Mar 30, 2008, 9:50:13 AM
>.< thank you
I hope it's good enough for the contest ^^;

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>>Michelle<<

I love you, Taylor =]

"You were given the life you live, because someone knew you were strong enough to live it."

:gallery:
[link] <<check it out peas^_^
~mizeryfoxo0:iconmizeryfoxo0: Mar 30, 2008, 10:14:35 AM
yes!!!! yes it is !!! :boogie:

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some people are like slinkys their good for nothing but they bring a smile to your face when you throw them down the stairs - :shrug:
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=dark-blood-may:icondark-blood-may: Mar 30, 2008, 10:57:34 AM
:blush: I hope so... and thanks fer the fav

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>>Michelle<<

I love you, Taylor =]

"You were given the life you live, because someone knew you were strong enough to live it."

:gallery:
[link] <<check it out peas^_^
~mizeryfoxo0:iconmizeryfoxo0: Mar 30, 2008, 12:27:38 PM
yep your welcome ^-^

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some people are like slinkys their good for nothing but they bring a smile to your face when you throw them down the stairs - :shrug:
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~TheShadowBunny:iconTheShadowBunny: Mar 30, 2008, 1:08:59 PM
I love it! I hope you win!

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I live under your bed.
=dark-blood-may:icondark-blood-may: Mar 30, 2008, 1:09:49 PM
>.< thank you, but I doubt I will ^^; I mean the other entries are really good... so.. who knows :shrug:

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>>Michelle<<

I love you, Taylor =]

"You were given the life you live, because someone knew you were strong enough to live it."

:gallery:
[link] <<check it out peas^_^
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